Sunday, January 20, 2013

In which I....die of embrassment


So, um, yeah, please laugh. Because I can't believe I am doing this.

I found some random docs on my computer of schoolwork I did back in 2007, when I was in 9th grade. I was doing a program called the Omnibus for History and Writing. Which of course made it super fun....but let's not hold our breath over my 13-year-old writing, eh? Just for fun, I am posting up a story I wrote, unedited, raw, exactly the way it was on that doc when I pulled it up.

I'm pretty sure this assignment had a point to it, besides being set in William the Conquerer's Norman England {I'm related to him, by the way, directly through royalty, with proven docs. Just a random, cool sidenote there... :D}. Something about knowing what's really important or something like that. Else I can't justify that ending....

Anyway....laugh. Please.


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The Norman Way
By
 Pure Grace
 
Ó Pure Grace


The sun was shinning brightly over the glistening indigo sea. The sharp morning breeze carried the exultant call of birds, greeting each other anew for the day, along with the distinctly salty flavor of the ocean. From his high perch among the rocks, Edmund could clearly see the approaching vessels. This time, the fair Saxon knew, they were not coming to simply speak with King Harold. They were coming to conquer. Simply enough, the boy thought, they are coming to kill us–and our families!
He turned and briskly began to scramble down the cliff. Sprinting along the trail, Edmond felt a quaver of hatred, taken over by one of fear, not for himself, but for his sisters and mother. What right had those Normans to take England into their domain? In a moment the lad was joined by another.
“You saw them?” he panted, without slowing his pace.
“Aye,” the other responded. “We will tell the others.”
In a few minutes they reached a small camp. The man obviously in charge immediately called them to him. After reporting the boys helped clear the camp and begin to fall back. The main English army was ready when William the Conqueror disembarked. The invaders were to be repulsed to the last defense. Expectantly, Edmund stood by his father on the battle field with a heaving chest. If the Normans won, Saxon Britain was dead.
After much waiting the enemy troops appeared. The conflict that ensued became known as the Battle of Hastings. Edmund fought to defend his country, his people, his family valiantly, but still one by one the Saxons fell. At the close of the batter few men were alive. Edmund, captured, lay desperate with fear. The Normans had won! It was of little comfort when the noble lad was set free. Few would retain their position unless they conformed. That would be imposable for him. Yet one glance at the faces of his dear ones at home changed that opinion, and as others before him, he reluctantly reformed to the Norman way of life. A family was better than any tradition.



 
 
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Also, this week's Once Upon a Time... linkup will be on: an interview.



 

13 comments:

  1. First off, I love your little "The End" pictures. They always make me smile. ;) And I did laugh! You were a funny 13-yr-old-writer. Mind you, I was still rewriting my own version of narnia at 13, and it was worse then that. I will never post anything about it. Mark my words. I loved the, "That would be imposable for him." ;P

    So, for the link up, just make up questions an interview a character?! Sounds great!

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    1. Haha!!! I'm glad!
      Yes, I was... I'm glad you laughed! Ooooh! I want to see it! Come on now. ;)

      Mmmm, I was thinking more along the lines of an interview WITHIN your book... But that sounds like fun too so feel welcome to do it!

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  2. Hehehe, you know, I didn't think it was that terrible!! Certainly better than anything i ever would have written at 13! :D
    And yeah, I love the "the end" pix <3
    xx

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    1. You are kind... ;)
      LOL! I'm glad they are enjoyed! Sometimes I feel silly putting them up, but they are kind of my "trademark" for this blog! :D

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  3. That's not so bad! A lot of typical pre-teen purple prose, but i think it's sweet. Especially with those exclamation marks all over the place!

    I will join the others in saying that "the end" picture is the cutest thing on four legs too, ahaha!

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    1. Yes, definitely!!! :D I'll never get over exclamation points. Ever. I love them!!!!!! ;)

      Hehe!! Great! <3

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  4. Hehe, you should have read MY short stories. *Flinches* Oh, they're awful. lol...

    I keep meaning to enter that giveaway, but Ikeep forgetting. Must remember to do it. Must. Must. Must. :D

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    1. You're right! I should!!! ;D

      Do it!!! I'll be making a separate reminder post for it soon. You can enter then.

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    2. Hehehe, well the only way that will happen is if you find my little books in my junk drawer. Otherwise.... nope. Sorry. :D

      Coolio. Thanks. *grin* My memory isn't what it used to be. lol

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    3. *Smirk.* OH but you can read my newer work.... My sister and I are doing a letter game. It ought to be fun. :)

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  5. LOL - I liked it! Don't be embarrassed - believe me, my writings from the age of 13 are much, much worse. I absolutely do not have the gumption to show them to the world like you've done here. Just ain't happ'nin'.

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    1. I'm embarrassed anyway.... I still can't believe I actually did it!!! LOL! Haha. You should! It'd be fun to see what you did!

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