I began writing historical
fiction at age 7. My first novel, scrawled out in a small pink notebook {yes, the one pictures} and
titled, The Princess Travels, was set
in the 1800’s {don’t ask me how I got a princess in the Midwest; I managed very
well, thank you}. My favorite books from the time I could first read {at age 3}
until I was 18 years old were all historical fiction. In fact, I read history
books just for fun.
I was {I guess I must admit still
am}, what you call, a history nerd. Or geek, depending on whether you are my
sister Brisa or my sister Abrienne.
And I love it.
So, writing historical fiction. .
. Me?
Historical fiction {HF} is not
easy. You cannot just sit down and pound away at your keys and expect a
historical fiction to come to life beneath your fingers. HF takes work. Lots of
it.
From accurate settings, to
correct mindsets, to what analogies you can use, historical fiction is like no
other genre, just as they are not like historical fiction. And what makes it
unique is what makes it awesome.
History itself is incredible. To
flip through the pages of cultures, lives, and empires who once dominated this
world of ours is as enchanting as it is almost scary. There are so many people,
so many cultures, so many indescribable things from those other times, other
places, and it is incredible thinking about them, knowing they were once real,
life to someone, just the way things were, and now . . . now it is gone.
The world in which your character
moves is as important as the character himself. You can paint the most
believable, realistic, heartrending protagonist imaginable. But if his world
does not fit around him, he is detached and we lose contact with him. Your setting will be
whatever culture you decide to write about, and it means more than just the
kind of clothes and rooms and wars that encircle your character. It is everything. From the stream trickling
through a dark Sherwood Forest to a sparkling goblet in Queen Hatshepsut’s
throne room to the dull, lifeless cap flopped on William Bradford’s head. It is
the kind of dialogue and ways of expression between your cast. Can you see the
picture, see the room, see the world where your character lives? That is his
setting and his life. And it has to be real. It has to be his setting. Throwing a great, big medieval sword into your
Egyptian pyramid is not going to create a very easy or authentic picture for
your reader to imagine. It just won’t feel right.
Analogies are so important in writing. They
describe, evoke, imagine, so much of your character and their feelings and the
understandings of the world around them. And it is important to get them right.
If you are writing a story set in medieval times, it would not work for you to use this analogy:
Rosamund felt as
though everything around her was spinning like tires on black ice.
As you and I know, there was no
such thing as tires OR black ice during the Medieval Ages. And
our poor Rosamund would have no idea what it felt like to be spin like that.
Aah, and then you have correct mindsets. I
must admit, this is one thing I find the most misused by HF writers. We tend to
like and want to write in the mentality of our own culture. And that is a big
mistake.
First of all, I think a part of
the charm of an ancient culture is the ways the people thought, the things they
did, and why. To destroy that by bringing very Western ideas into a HF novel is
as good as burning your book before you start. It devastates it authenticity.
I know it is almost heresy for me
to say this, but I must, because it is true. In most of the ancient world,
education was not looked upon as important to anyone but the upper class. In
fact, most of the time, the people believed they were incapable of learning. So
it would be inconsistent to create your main character a peasant boy and give
him great learning {no matter what scheme you come up with to give it to him}.
Your story had better be good if you want to tempt to mount that social
barrier. And it is better not done. I rather enjoy the thought of getting to
know a fellow who is just as smart in common sense as you or I without an
education ~ and who doesn’t even care to have one.
See, the charm of historical
fiction is not in how many rules you can twist to get away from the real ethnics
of that time and make it desirable to this culture, but how many rules you can
fit in and still capture your reader. For therein
lies the desire of every HF writer. We want our readers to fall in love
with the richness of the history of our story as much as the people of our
story. And if they don’t, we have not succeeded. If they don’t want to run away
to ancient Incan ruins or towering Italian cathedrals, we have failed.
Historical fiction will always be
my favorite genre to both read and write. It is just one of those things,
something that touches a trigger inside me and boils a passion and a desire for
it. I will always find myself buried deep within those cultures, wondering just
what it was like, just who would have lived, and what sort of things they might
have done. And you will always find me curled up with a blanket and a good HF
for company.
